If you wish more donors would respond to your emails, we are here for you!
This is tip #2 to write an email to get more visits.
If you missed the first tip - Look for the Hook - you can find it here.
Think about this when you write your next email:
Connect vs. Convince: It can be so easy to fall into the trap of including links, facts, figures and stats in the hope of educating someone into meeting with you.
But, what are the chances someone will actually click on those links?
Will they actually read an attached one-pager or brochure?
If they do click on a link, will they come back to your email and actually respond?
For years, as a higher-ed fundraiser, I wrote email novels.
I included quotes from faculty, links to student stories and bulleted "fun facts" about new programs.
I labored over those emails. The results? 1 visit for every 10 emails.
When I finally realized that...um, I would never respond to one of my own damn emails - why would anyone else?
I refocused with the goal...